Tuesday, October 14, 2008
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1 comments:
Your victim is stereotyped as an impressionable first year and I think the hyberbole is effective in conveying your point. Other Proppian characters include your seal-clubbing villain and your good-looking hero. I think the story builds anticipation and reaches a climax when the hero punches the villain. Todorov would be proud of how you re-establish equilibrium with violent action, typical of the comic strip genre. By using a lot of frames the scenes are well set and effective. In the one frame however, the security guard is exchanging violent words with Lucas but Lucas is grabbing the security guard’s collar which is a bit confusing. Otherwise, I loved it!
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